Rexone's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[DnB] Clusterfuck]

This is a nice start. But there are some very glaring issues about it.

The redundancy is the main problem. Each small jingle is repeated three times in a row, which is not very pleasing to listen to. The drums also never seem to change their pattern throughout the song.

The structure needs a ton of work. The song just jumps right in and repeats the same pattern until the end. Try to determine a set of bars for an intro, build, drop, etc. (using "Add marker" in the arrangement window).

Try to add more ambiance, effects, and more tracks in general.

I will give you one star rather than none because I can understand your attempt. Keep trying! I know you can improve. :)

Delerium responds:

i cry nonetheless